Year: 2025

How far did we come !

I wrote a poem like I usually do sometimes.

One of my friends asked metaAI to explain it, it did OK. But some Brilliance I could see, which used to be reserved for humans until recently.

Today, I asked chatGTP same question and below is its lengthy explanation. It captured essence of poem very well.

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This poem captures a sense of exhaustion, determination, and the pursuit of a goal, possibly against a backdrop of inner conflict or hardship. Here's an interpretation of its key elements:

1. "Middle of the journey"

  • This suggests the speaker is midway through an endeavor or struggle. It could be literal (a physical journey) or metaphorical (a life stage, a challenge, or a pursuit).

2. "My eyes are burdened, burning and bright red"

  • The imagery here conveys fatigue, both physical and emotional. The redness implies sleeplessness, stress, or overexertion, highlighting the toll the journey has taken.

3. "I can not stop now"

  • Despite the exhaustion, the speaker is resolute and refuses to give up. This line emphasizes their determination to see things through.

4. "Time for my three shot poison"

  • "Three shot poison" could symbolize an unhealthy coping mechanism (like alcohol, caffeine, or another vice)
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  • "Three shot poison" could symbolize an unhealthy coping mechanism (like alcohol, caffeine, or another vice)
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Where Salmon sheds salt

Middle of the journey,

My eyes are burdened, burning and bright red.

I can not stop now,

Time for my three shot poison.

Across the lake,

where Salmon sheds salt,

there lies my flag.

I keep rolling

day after day.

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